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Post by starian2003 on Apr 9, 2006 13:26:04 GMT -5
Okay, so I posted Part 1 as a test. Thanks for the constructive criticism, Zoe, I appreciate it.
(Background: I had like 40 stories in my head, and they were all getting kind of mushed together...I had to really concentrate on making 1 story line. I actually whipped that story up in about 20 minutes.)
I've decided to make it a series. However, I need your help with ideas! I know I can write, but I really suck at the technical aspects of things, like story covers and realistic items.
So if ya'll can, please let me know what you think Part 2 should be about. I was gonna make them go to the club, but after that I'm clueless, lol.
So help me out. And give me an idea about story covers! I have no idea how to use Photoshop or MSPaint!
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Post by Zoe on Apr 9, 2006 13:35:12 GMT -5
Okay, well, I can make the story cover for you if you want. That's #1 so far. Now on to the story. If you r going to send Leli to the club, you could add drama there. Like for instance her mother has an argument about leaving Tre by himself and so, Leli has to take him. Later on at the club, she orders some drinks and what not and something catches her eye. At this point, it could be someone or something familiar that was at the club. Remember don't ruch and take your time. Let's c.... umm... maybe Leli decides to take a look at it or someone and recognizes this person, maybe Tre's fther. You can chose. It's your story. Or maybe you can keep that part somewhere in chapter 3 or 4. Maybe Lelli is fustrated and then something bad happens. There can be a continuing in chapter 3 or you can finish it here. Hope I helped.
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Post by sishxy06 on Apr 9, 2006 13:37:45 GMT -5
Story covers: I hav a tutorial on my simpage 2 help u w/ that. I hope it helps. I havent looked at ur story yet so i can't really help u ther. I'll b sure to take a look, tho!
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Post by Zoe on Apr 9, 2006 13:39:22 GMT -5
Yeah, I looked at it 2.
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Post by sishxy06 on Apr 9, 2006 13:40:57 GMT -5
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Post by starian2003 on Apr 9, 2006 13:55:27 GMT -5
Thanks you guys. Sish, I'm gonna check your tutorial out. Zoe, if it looks like I STILL can't do it, I will call on you for help. PM me your AIM user name or email so I can send you pics and whatnot...
I'm going to church in a few, so when I get back I'll try and work on my story line some. Thanks again!
I am SO goin to love it here.
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Post by Zoe on Apr 9, 2006 14:01:13 GMT -5
Ya welcome girl! I'd do anything for a chocolate sista! lol
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Post by Luci on Apr 9, 2006 22:51:27 GMT -5
Ya welcome girl! I'd do anything for a chocolate sista! lol im not chocolate would u do anything for me? lol
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Post by Zoe on Apr 11, 2006 6:23:40 GMT -5
Yeah! lol Girl, u point out every detail from every sentence! You should be a lawyer. lol j/p
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Post by candycake46 on Apr 11, 2006 7:05:31 GMT -5
I'll help can I proofread
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Post by Zoe on Apr 11, 2006 15:03:40 GMT -5
I think thats a GREAT idea! lol
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Post by candycake46 on Apr 12, 2006 11:31:42 GMT -5
What is
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Post by sishxy06 on Apr 12, 2006 11:56:46 GMT -5
u proofreadin, grrl! A little late, lol. star, u welcome. soz i waznt herre wen u said thx. so ya welcome.
n' luci: grrl u be somewhat chocolatish rite? so wat wud dat make u? u still a chocolate sistah 2 us. DW! :-D
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Post by Zoe on Apr 12, 2006 14:45:52 GMT -5
lol! True dat.
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Post by starian2003 on Apr 14, 2006 12:57:08 GMT -5
Still working on it ya'll. I finally figured out how to use MS Paint to edit cover stories...(Thanks Sesh!)I need a program that isn't so...basic, though, lol. I'm gonna see if I can bootleg Photoshop. Just working on my story line now...Should be up by Friday of next week. I'm gonna use a couple of ideas from you too, Zoe. Thanks chicks.
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